Is this good for the first page of my book?

Oh. my bananas. Bella. So many people answered your question. Hahahaha. Maybe I do want a purse though, okay, you can't blame me. Back to the question though, I honestly and unbiasedly thought it was amazing. I do have to agree with the other people though when they talk about "too much description" thing. Like you could keep the colors I guess, but when you describe the beanie you could say "black beanie" or "knit beanie" or "dark beanie". It still describes the beanie, just with less words and gets the point across. Anywho's I thought it was still pretty good, and other people did to, so that's all that really matters anyways. :D